N့ow this vn gonna be one of my fav I really like this vn because not like other vn it's new style for me and storyline is really good thank for creating vn sleth
This is hard to say! I've been writing stories for years before I started Demons Within, and this visual novel is just a new, cooler way to tell a story for me. :)
If I could say I have any inspirations, it would perhaps be Shelter since following its creation and development was definitely what pushed me into telling a story in a visual novel format myself as well!
Sleth your work is amazing, can't play this game without wanting to play the new update in the same instant, awesome character and story. I also wanted to know if we will have the option of choosing not to influence or having different ways of doing it more often, i like it the way it is now but it would also be interesting if we had more freedom or choices of influencing or not, in different ways :)
The game is amazing and one of the only games im still following since there are only a few still progressing(at least that i know) and im super hyped for the next update, keep the nice job! <3
What do you mean by the choice of not influencing? In most instances of influences, there is already the option of just continuing the text forward and not interfering, which would be the choice of not influencing. As the game continues, the choices might expand a little, but too many choices often lead to too much branching and ripples into even more branching in the future, so I do my best to give choices while also keeping the story concise. It is still mostly a linear story after all.
Oh alright! I know the Symbols of a heart, warning sign, and skull have a specific meaning to the importance of the choice, but it's escaping my memory, I look forward to it! Thank you very muc
You should probably go further back in your save. There is more than one instance that can lead to a bad ending in that part and you might be stuck with a save after having already made the decision.
I've received more reports and found a bug around this part related to the warnings about the bad ending when playing on Android. Maybe that was the case?
At any rate, I already worked on a fix for this in case it happens. There's a point there where you have to infuse and tapping with the finger doesn't seem to work. Holding the finger down on the wheel seems to work, but that's not supposed to be that way! Maybe try that if you're still stuck!
We're very close to the public release of the new update (likely next week), so I'll ship that fix with that. Sorry for the inconvenience!
After playing the public version, I must say this FVN is outstanding! The author's writing is exceptional, the interactive elements are unexpected, and the storyline is captivating. I'm really looking forward to where it's headed. However, it seems Resnick still has a long way to go haha. I hope this FVN reaches its conclusion; good works deserve attention, and I'll do my best to promote it to my friends :)
Hey! My aim is to eventually get Japanese translation done by people. Unfortunately, I don't know anyone in the area of translation to Japanese, but if I find someone and manage to make it work, definitely yes!
Hii. I just disco eres this VN but It has a stranger bug or thing.
I Skip a little texts for check quickly sone scene, when I reach Ress with Ed sex and another day load a saved point before and reach That story point again, the scene not appears again, and I start the Game since first and I cannot GET see That scene never again, Ress does another thing with Ed controlling to the tiger and then only appears texts about another scene which not appears.
Sorry! I announced in the devlog for version 11's Patreon release that from now on, the public version of the previous version will be released at roughly the same time as the new Patreon version comes out! Therefore, version 11 will become public once version 12 comes out. It's in the works right now!
I hadn't played the game in about 2 years and I've caught up on everything so I'll have a bit to say. I really like the captain. Serious, charismatic, hot, strict but still caring and comforting towards his men. Each of his appearances is much appreciated. That said, I have my doubts about him, particularly because of the night Ludwig was cursed. I find it strange that, as captain, he didn't notice when two demons were fighting inside a soldier's room. I suppose he was affected by Sloth's spell. I find it frustrating that Resnick doesn't want to talk about the two suspicious individuals he saw. It's better to talk about it rather than wait for these two men to do something irreparable. Even if the captain or someone else doesn't believe him, at least he won't have any regrets. But I imagine that after everything that's happened to him, I can understand why he'd want to keep a low profile. Besides, the fact that he doesn't want to talk about it even to his own brother worries me. It gives me the impression that Russel is potentially suspicious, but i'm a bit paranoid, so it's probably nothing. In any case, the concept, the story and some of the characters (Garett ♥) are very interesting. I really like the way you've expanded the universe, particularly with the help of the purple words. I applaud this work!
Never played a VN that works like this one, it's cool hehe
Besides the history being good, the art is also awesome, and I liked how u make use of the UI, placing the text in the middle, but sometimes changing it, like the little texts that appear sometimes when u can influence someone
Waiting for more
Oh, out of curiosity, will u add an option to change the dongs? LMAO
As far as I noticed there was no mention about knots and such here, so I was very surprised when I saw it :P played some other VNs that let u choose which kind of dicks u wanted to see
SPOILER!!
Btw, found some typos (I think lol)
History says Ress is shirtless, but his sprite isn't
If there's a wave of heat to his face shouldn't his sprite be blushing? :P
Hey! I'm happy to hear you like the game so far! Thanks for the kind words!
I don't have plans for an alternate setting in that regard because it'd require a bunch of changes in text as well. Who knows, though, maybe someday it'll happen!
Thank you for the report of the sprite details with the text. They'll be fixed in the next upcoming update! ;)
OMG! Thank you so much for updating the Chinese translation and all the amazing people who worked on it.
I really love this FVN, but there are too many new words in this game for me. And I read chapter 1&2 without the translation tools, it's too SLOW! So I gave up. Currently, I can read this visual novel in its entirety.
I love this game! I'm attached to each one of the main cast and i can't wait to for the next updates! It's really rare for me to like a vn like this so much, and this one just clicked!
Hi sleth! Can you update the discord link please? I know you said you updated it to a permanent custom link that should alway work but I tried and it keeps saying that the link is invalid or expired.
also just finished the novel after 4 days and I wanna say it's one of the best novels I've ever read ^^. Every moment was spectacular and it always felt like I'm with them inside the novel experiencing all the moments with the characters ^^.
I look forward for the future updates and how will the story end! ^^
Also btw one more thing, is there a way to listen to or download the game's osts? Because I'm in love with some of the soundtracks.
Once again, may success always be on your side in this amazing project! ^^
Hmm, the discord link is now a permanent invite link that supposedly always works indeed! If you'd like, you could send me your Discord username in private and I can maybe check, but I have no idea why it wouldn't work!
As for the OST, unfortunately, we don't have that available anywhere yet as we're still working on improving the game's music more and more! Eventually though, I'd love to have it available! I'll make sure to announce it everywhere, Itch included, when that happens!
Thank you for your kind words! :D I hope you'll keep enjoying the next updates as well!
Uhhhh... They don't. They are totally free to use. (twitter has a subscription option, but it's just not worth it tho. You can still use the platform without it)
I'm having trouble running the latest public build (10.0). When I run the application, the game fails to load and gives an error code: 0xc000012f. I'm using the PC version on Windows 10.
Hmm, that's strange! I haven't had any other reports of this. I'd need more information to help you out! If you could please ask in our Discord server, it'd be easier to discuss. I think I'd need a screenshot of the whole error to guess what could be wrong.
It's quite odd, I tried a fresh install again today and I am able to run the game with no problems. I couldn't say how my previous issue resolved itself.
You're the second person to ask for that, but the link to Discord on this page seems to work for me. If you can let me know which link is broken, I can fix it right away. :)
We're only just beginning, so branching into other languages is something we haven't done yet, but it's on the radar! I'll take note of this request as well :)
I want to know why all my Memorium are unlocked. I've played everything in the public version, but everything is shown unlocked. And this problem has been plaguing me for the last six months since I started playing this game, with every version. I wonder if anyone else has been in this situation and I really want to see what's in the Memorium. (In addition, I am a Chinese gamer and use a Windows PC)
Hey! You mean everything in the Memorium is locked?
Some entries in the Memorium are unlocked just by going through the story, but most of them require clicking in the colored text during the story when you find it to view more information about what's highlighted. Once you click it once, it's unlocked in the Memorium forever. :)
I'm sorry for the typo, but what I meant was that everything in the Memorium was locked. And I'm pretty sure I've already played those things in the game (by using my demon powers for some purpose). But everything in the Memorium still can't be unlocked. I currently think it was probably because I used a plugin to translate the game into Chinese, and it might have conflicted with the game itself and prevented me from unlocking the Memorium. So I wanted to see if you've ever been in a similar situation. I guess I'll just have to try again for myself. Thank you for your patient answer. I hope you can do better and better.
I see! I'm sorry to hear that. I've never had a report of this happening but I'll keep an eye out! I'm also trying to look into branching the game into a few other languages and chinese is high on the list, so hopefully that can come soon. :)
Hey, I'm excited to tell you that I was able to unlock this version 10 update to Events. Although other parts of the Memorium remain locked, and all of the previous Memoriums cannot be unlocked. (I've already skiping Ludwig's route again and still haven't unlocked anything new.) I can't guess what the reason is, but I'd love to tell you about this development. If it doesn't bother you, I hope you can check if there are any changes in this update of Events.
That's good! Some of the events in Update 10 unlock automatically. This likely happens because of the plugin you mentioned that translated the game. Since the clickable things to unlock in the Memorium are part of the text and I'm guessing that this plugin ends up removing the links, therefore making them unclickable.
Maybe try going through the game without this plugin and you will see some text highlighted in pink sometimes. Those are the clickable memories that unlock them in the Memorium once seen.
I'll take note of your request, but I can't give certainty or an estimate as we're still early in the game's development and just looking into branching into other languages!
of the best novels I've read, I love how handle everyday life with its dose of lore, I think it's a perfect balance, I guess I would like to see a little more romance but maybe the story doesn't go in that line (I would love more closeness with Ludwig) but otherwise it's amazing and I hope continue with the project.
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N့ow this vn gonna be one of my fav I really like this vn because not like other vn it's new style for me and storyline is really good thank for creating vn sleth
Ludwig is such a sweet guy. 10/10 service bear
Also i wanted to ask if you have any inspirations :)
This is hard to say! I've been writing stories for years before I started Demons Within, and this visual novel is just a new, cooler way to tell a story for me. :)
If I could say I have any inspirations, it would perhaps be Shelter since following its creation and development was definitely what pushed me into telling a story in a visual novel format myself as well!
Sleth your work is amazing, can't play this game without wanting to play the new update in the same instant, awesome character and story. I also wanted to know if we will have the option of choosing not to influence or having different ways of doing it more often, i like it the way it is now but it would also be interesting if we had more freedom or choices of influencing or not, in different ways :)
The game is amazing and one of the only games im still following since there are only a few still progressing(at least that i know) and im super hyped for the next update, keep the nice job! <3
Thank you for the kind words! :)
What do you mean by the choice of not influencing? In most instances of influences, there is already the option of just continuing the text forward and not interfering, which would be the choice of not influencing. As the game continues, the choices might expand a little, but too many choices often lead to too much branching and ripples into even more branching in the future, so I do my best to give choices while also keeping the story concise. It is still mostly a linear story after all.
I hope this answers your question!
Does every characters we see will have a sex scene with Resnick ?
This is hard to say! Some planned features coming in the game hopefully soonish might make that clearer. Or, at least, open new possibilities. ;)
感觉作者及时更新。点赞👍。
Hey Sleth, loving the vn so far. I just want to if there is a way to check progress or to know if I have explored all the content so far?
Not yet, unfortunately! I've had a bunch of request for a game guide of some sort and I'm seeing what I can do
Heya so I'm wondering, is there a place to get a refresher of what each symbol indicates when the wheel shows up?
Not quite yet! We're gonna have to get further into the game to learn more about it!
Oh alright! I know the Symbols of a heart, warning sign, and skull have a specific meaning to the importance of the choice, but it's escaping my memory, I look forward to it! Thank you very muc
Help, im stuck at Gunther's route or something! Everything time I restart it's always that ending part?
You should probably go further back in your save. There is more than one instance that can lead to a bad ending in that part and you might be stuck with a save after having already made the decision.
I've received more reports and found a bug around this part related to the warnings about the bad ending when playing on Android. Maybe that was the case?
At any rate, I already worked on a fix for this in case it happens. There's a point there where you have to infuse and tapping with the finger doesn't seem to work. Holding the finger down on the wheel seems to work, but that's not supposed to be that way! Maybe try that if you're still stuck!
We're very close to the public release of the new update (likely next week), so I'll ship that fix with that. Sorry for the inconvenience!
Thanks, for the info.
Very considerate, I was indeed stuck. Although I'm referring too the endings, and routes or soo. Maybe I didn't clarify what I was suggesting. Sorry.
Lovely story, you make. シ
(Great, massively, etc)
After playing the public version, I must say this FVN is outstanding! The author's writing is exceptional, the interactive elements are unexpected, and the storyline is captivating. I'm really looking forward to where it's headed. However, it seems Resnick still has a long way to go haha. I hope this FVN reaches its conclusion; good works deserve attention, and I'll do my best to promote it to my friends :)
Are you planning to provide a Japanese translation version, including AI automatic translation?
Hey! My aim is to eventually get Japanese translation done by people. Unfortunately, I don't know anyone in the area of translation to Japanese, but if I find someone and manage to make it work, definitely yes!
Hii. I just disco eres this VN but It has a stranger bug or thing.
I Skip a little texts for check quickly sone scene, when I reach Ress with Ed sex and another day load a saved point before and reach That story point again, the scene not appears again, and I start the Game since first and I cannot GET see That scene never again, Ress does another thing with Ed controlling to the tiger and then only appears texts about another scene which not appears.
PD: sorry my bas english 🙏
都一个月了,还不更新的吗?
Sorry! I announced in the devlog for version 11's Patreon release that from now on, the public version of the previous version will be released at roughly the same time as the new Patreon version comes out! Therefore, version 11 will become public once version 12 comes out. It's in the works right now!
Okay so I might be a little dumb HOW DO I GET PASSED GUNTHERS PART 😭😭
Does Gunther only available in the bad end route ? Can we meet him again in another story route :( ?
打开一看竟然更新了,太棒了。
Spoilers :
I hadn't played the game in about 2 years and I've caught up on everything so I'll have a bit to say. I really like the captain. Serious, charismatic, hot, strict but still caring and comforting towards his men. Each of his appearances is much appreciated. That said, I have my doubts about him, particularly because of the night Ludwig was cursed. I find it strange that, as captain, he didn't notice when two demons were fighting inside a soldier's room. I suppose he was affected by Sloth's spell.
I find it frustrating that Resnick doesn't want to talk about the two suspicious individuals he saw. It's better to talk about it rather than wait for these two men to do something irreparable. Even if the captain or someone else doesn't believe him, at least he won't have any regrets. But I imagine that after everything that's happened to him, I can understand why he'd want to keep a low profile. Besides, the fact that he doesn't want to talk about it even to his own brother worries me. It gives me the impression that Russel is potentially suspicious, but i'm a bit paranoid, so it's probably nothing.
In any case, the concept, the story and some of the characters (Garett ♥) are very interesting. I really like the way you've expanded the universe, particularly with the help of the purple words. I applaud this work!
There are so many things I can't skip in the selection that I wish I could reduce them to make it easier to see all the options
It was interesting :)
Never played a VN that works like this one, it's cool hehe
Besides the history being good, the art is also awesome, and I liked how u make use of the UI, placing the text in the middle, but sometimes changing it, like the little texts that appear sometimes when u can influence someone
Waiting for more
Oh, out of curiosity, will u add an option to change the dongs? LMAO
As far as I noticed there was no mention about knots and such here, so I was very surprised when I saw it :P played some other VNs that let u choose which kind of dicks u wanted to see
SPOILER!!
Btw, found some typos (I think lol)
History says Ress is shirtless, but his sprite isn't
If there's a wave of heat to his face shouldn't his sprite be blushing? :P
Hey!
I'm happy to hear you like the game so far! Thanks for the kind words!
I don't have plans for an alternate setting in that regard because it'd require a bunch of changes in text as well. Who knows, though, maybe someday it'll happen!
Thank you for the report of the sprite details with the text. They'll be fixed in the next upcoming update! ;)
Bahaha 'k, waiting for that next update
See ya o/
When I try to transform nothing happens, is this a bug or am I doing something wrong?
Can you elaborate on it a little bit? At what part of the game?
Is the White Wolf Commander a romantic partner?
OMG! Thank you so much for updating the Chinese translation and all the amazing people who worked on it.
I really love this FVN, but there are too many new words in this game for me. And I read chapter 1&2 without the translation tools, it's too SLOW! So I gave up. Currently, I can read this visual novel in its entirety.
I love this game! I'm attached to each one of the main cast and i can't wait to for the next updates! It's really rare for me to like a vn like this so much, and this one just clicked!
All the dudes in this game are just PEAK furry, great job! good story too, lots of hot & horny scenarios. +A!
Increíble vn me facina mucho muy buena
What a great gem, absolutely cannot wait for more!
Hi sleth! Can you update the discord link please? I know you said you updated it to a permanent custom link that should alway work but I tried and it keeps saying that the link is invalid or expired.
also just finished the novel after 4 days and I wanna say it's one of the best novels I've ever read ^^. Every moment was spectacular and it always felt like I'm with them inside the novel experiencing all the moments with the characters ^^.
I look forward for the future updates and how will the story end! ^^
Also btw one more thing, is there a way to listen to or download the game's osts? Because I'm in love with some of the soundtracks.
Once again, may success always be on your side in this amazing project! ^^
Hey there!
Hmm, the discord link is now a permanent invite link that supposedly always works indeed! If you'd like, you could send me your Discord username in private and I can maybe check, but I have no idea why it wouldn't work!
As for the OST, unfortunately, we don't have that available anywhere yet as we're still working on improving the game's music more and more! Eventually though, I'd love to have it available! I'll make sure to announce it everywhere, Itch included, when that happens!
Thank you for your kind words! :D I hope you'll keep enjoying the next updates as well!
Okay sure I don't mind at all but may I ask how do I send my name or in what platform do I send my name? Discord?
Perhaps Twitter or Bluesky private messages, if you have those?
Nevermind that, I actually don't have them I never thought that they require subscription :/
Uhhhh... They don't. They are totally free to use. (twitter has a subscription option, but it's just not worth it tho. You can still use the platform without it)
Maravillosa novela visual, me encanta el estilo de Sprites de los personajes, ojalá y futuramente pueda leerlo en español, me encanta!
I really like the expressions of the characters lol. It makes the already-good story better :D
I'm having trouble running the latest public build (10.0). When I run the application, the game fails to load and gives an error code: 0xc000012f. I'm using the PC version on Windows 10.
Hmm, that's strange! I haven't had any other reports of this. I'd need more information to help you out! If you could please ask in our Discord server, it'd be easier to discuss. I think I'd need a screenshot of the whole error to guess what could be wrong.
It's quite odd, I tried a fresh install again today and I am able to run the game with no problems. I couldn't say how my previous issue resolved itself.
Well, either way, I'm happy it worked out!
Can you update the discord link please
Hey!
You're the second person to ask for that, but the link to Discord on this page seems to work for me. If you can let me know which link is broken, I can fix it right away. :)
The link below the discord logo
Every way I tested it seemed to work still, but just in case, I've replaced it with a link to a permanent, custom invite link that should always work!
Thank you
Will this NV have a translation into Spanish?
We're only just beginning, so branching into other languages is something we haven't done yet, but it's on the radar! I'll take note of this request as well :)
Can someone post an updated link to the discord? Iit keeps saying the current link is expried, thanks!
Hey!
Which link is tagged as expired? I can fix it! The one on the Demons Within page above here seems to work for me.
I want to know why all my Memorium are unlocked. I've played everything in the public version, but everything is shown unlocked. And this problem has been plaguing me for the last six months since I started playing this game, with every version. I wonder if anyone else has been in this situation and I really want to see what's in the Memorium. (In addition, I am a Chinese gamer and use a Windows PC)
Hey! You mean everything in the Memorium is locked?
Some entries in the Memorium are unlocked just by going through the story, but most of them require clicking in the colored text during the story when you find it to view more information about what's highlighted. Once you click it once, it's unlocked in the Memorium forever. :)
I'm sorry for the typo, but what I meant was that everything in the Memorium was locked. And I'm pretty sure I've already played those things in the game (by using my demon powers for some purpose). But everything in the Memorium still can't be unlocked. I currently think it was probably because I used a plugin to translate the game into Chinese, and it might have conflicted with the game itself and prevented me from unlocking the Memorium. So I wanted to see if you've ever been in a similar situation. I guess I'll just have to try again for myself. Thank you for your patient answer. I hope you can do better and better.
I see! I'm sorry to hear that. I've never had a report of this happening but I'll keep an eye out! I'm also trying to look into branching the game into a few other languages and chinese is high on the list, so hopefully that can come soon. :)
I'm so excited to hear that. I hope the Chinese translation can be completed soon. Thank you for your hard work
Hey, I'm excited to tell you that I was able to unlock this version 10 update to Events. Although other parts of the Memorium remain locked, and all of the previous Memoriums cannot be unlocked. (I've already skiping Ludwig's route again and still haven't unlocked anything new.) I can't guess what the reason is, but I'd love to tell you about this development. If it doesn't bother you, I hope you can check if there are any changes in this update of Events.
That's good! Some of the events in Update 10 unlock automatically. This likely happens because of the plugin you mentioned that translated the game. Since the clickable things to unlock in the Memorium are part of the text and I'm guessing that this plugin ends up removing the links, therefore making them unclickable.
Maybe try going through the game without this plugin and you will see some text highlighted in pink sometimes. Those are the clickable memories that unlock them in the Memorium once seen.
Where are the CGs we unlock?
We don't have a place in the gallery for CGs you've seen in the game yet, but it's in the to-do list for future features!
Will there be sometimes a german translation?
I'll take note of your request, but I can't give certainty or an estimate as we're still early in the game's development and just looking into branching into other languages!
Can the community help with translation in different languages? :)
Not yet, but I'll look into that possibility to see what can be done!
that bad end..was..amazing o.o.. lost all control haha
The one with the bull? Hell, I almost wish it was longer
of the best novels I've read, I love how handle everyday life with its dose of lore, I think it's a perfect balance, I guess I would like to see a little more romance but maybe the story doesn't go in that line (I would love more closeness with Ludwig) but otherwise it's amazing and I hope continue with the project.
hm, for some reason i cant get past update 7.5's end.... weird.
Nevermind, uninstall/reinstall fixed it....
Fancy new cg! Hooray! Cant wait to read all the new stuff !!!!!
wow.. i love this new update alot! Its wonderful finally seeing russel. I absolutely cannot wait for new updates.
im officially a patreon member ! This game has gotten too good not to support in some way :)
Idk why but Garret gives John Price vibe, is it because he's a captain?